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I see Her standing there in the hall again,
and all I do is pray.
Pray that I might gather the courage to talk to Her
and wonder what I’d say.

As I pass her frustrated that I didn’t say a simple “Hello”
I see Her smile in my direction
and my heart drops through the school hallway tile
as I try to hide my affection.

Walking away with now the same smile on my face
I’m glad She acknowledges who I am
I see her get in the car with her pot-smoking ‘friend’
and watch them drive away as he ‘turns up his jam’

I get on the bus and actually enjoy the ride home
as I walk away from my bustop and round the turn
I begin to cherish the time I get to think about Her
and thoughts marriage I begin to yearn

As I get inside and turn on the T.V.
I think maybe I should ask her on a date
Until I hear the news that a couple local kids died in a car crash
and I think, Too little, too late
©2002-2010 ~thisguy
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This is the version of my poem that should work. It's about waiting too long, and it being too late. Enjoy!

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:icondarko-ninja:
oh wow! that hits hard... I know this feeling in love and many other places... dang... makes you second guess how your spending your time... +fav... this is mahvelous

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"Black is like the brothel of the colors" - ritzcrackaa
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support :iconstrangledbyart:
why? read his journal to find out.
:iconbabykelly:
deng. this is really great. sad . ... really makes you think

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so free she was like a pineapple in a tree
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<3 kelly
:iconmentyrosa:
it's got lots of childish details that clash horribly with the idea of marriage. try foreshadowing the last line.

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"No, no. You're coming off all honest and observant. You know. Antisocial." -Jane from Daria.
:iconxcarebearx:
awww that is very sad....i love it...nice work....is it true? -thinks-.....that is very tragic if it was..

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Look me in the heart
and unbreak broken,
it won't happen...
:iconnotlaura:
Alright, here I am commenting on your poem, and making it an official comment! I liked your poem! I don't fully understand the part about the car crash, but that's alright. You can explain it to me later if you want. Oh, now you should comment on my stuff. That would be great.
:iconpoet-of-nothing:
wow! this is monumental!! a REAL breakthrough! You like destroyed these peoples ideas of happy endings!! Congrats!!

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:iconxcarebear413:
woohoo matthew!!!it was starting to get happy and then it got really sad (like kyle said)but awsome poem i like the way that the peom flows and the ending is good!!!(good writing that is)

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